Talent?

Chan · Posted: Wed Jul 02, 2003 12:18 am Post subject: Talent?

*try not to make this a spam thread*

I am interested in seeing that talent here around the'ville. I would like you to try to create a hiaku, t least one, on any subject you would like.

Hey Mr. Rob Lee
Can you ban a llama please?
llama goes oorgle
^bad one, but i am tired.

http://funereal.deviantart.com <go there for a really cool guys art :>
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Replica · Posted: Wed Jul 02, 2003 12:22 am Post subject:

that somone you know? i'm on deviant i jsut never put anything up... lol

one of my friends at school

www.spunefed.deviantart.com
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Violent Pacifist · Posted: Wed Jul 02, 2003 12:59 am Post subject:

I wrote a bunch of cool poems for a project in 6th grade about school being a prison and a torture chamber, where the teachers were trying to destroy our minds and take over the world. My teacher loved it so much that she wanted to keep it.
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Darkath · Posted: Wed Jul 02, 2003 2:11 am Post subject:

On deviantArt, it's all about the Wallpaper > Abstract section

Best wallpapers ever

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Mr.Kason Allen · Posted: Wed Jul 02, 2003 10:42 am Post subject:

sharkbyte · Posted: Wed Jul 02, 2003 11:02 am Post subject: Re: Talent?

[quote="Chan"]
I am interested in seeing that talent here around the'ville. I would like you to try to create a hiaku, t least one, on any subject you would like.

Hey Mr. Rob Lee
Can you ban a llama please?
llama goes oorgle
quote]

Do we have to subscribe to the 5-7-5 rule, or is 17 syllables acceptable? Your thread, your decision...
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GellyRoll · Posted: Wed Jul 02, 2003 11:51 am Post subject:

Everyone knows im beauitful

but you guys are not helpful

You insolt me like im nothing

I dont feel accepting

btw the poem is 100% not true
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Chan · Posted: Wed Jul 02, 2003 12:00 pm Post subject:

you can do either 5-7-5 or 17 or jsut any poem you wrote.

^_^ have fun.

Killak Kommander
Prefers Bison over goats
Sully Doesn't mind.
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Turbo! · Posted: Wed Jul 02, 2003 1:23 pm Post subject:

I am confused 'kay?
Please tell me what's going on
Cake is good, not pie

Wow what a dumb haiku

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Stevo · Posted: Wed Jul 02, 2003 1:30 pm Post subject:

Chan · Posted: Wed Jul 02, 2003 8:16 pm Post subject:

Bump this cool topic
There has to be more talent
Come on, someone post.
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thewz · Posted: Wed Jul 02, 2003 8:59 pm Post subject:

There's no talent here
For I am Canadian
And lick frozen pee

sharkbyte · Posted: Wed Jul 02, 2003 9:55 pm Post subject:

OK. I don't know how to write poetry n such. (Just ask Gelly)

But I looked this up for folks, just for any clarification...

Haiku

: an unrhymed verse form of Japanese origin having three lines containing usually 5, 7, and 5 syllables respectively; also : a poem in this form usually having a seasonal reference
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Seele_Kriecher · Registered User Joined: 02 Jul 2003 Posts: 181

I always play DoD
can't you see
you're skills are no match for me
when i snipe you in the head
you go dead
and our mg pumps you full of lead

lol hows that???????????

Seele_Kriecher · Registered User Joined: 02 Jul 2003 Posts: 181

the sniper
sits in his perch
waiting for the kill
he sits still
waits
then creates
his shot
through the bushes
through the trees
he is where nobody sees
finally an enemy comes near
the sniper sits still with no fear
unloads one round
into the enemys head
now his enemy lays there dead

now if thats not a good poem i dunno what is