poems

Gurrg · Posted: Mon Sep 02, 2002 8:52 am Post subject:

Aweosme job people, i'm not that creative to think up one of those until later in the school year,hehe. Right now my brain is on cruise control.
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-=ITS=-GaladerieL[Vegas] · Posted: Mon Sep 02, 2002 2:23 pm Post subject:

thanks gurrg on the nice thoughts from my poems and everybody else who has shared there here... Great job on them and lots of work put into them from those that have written some

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bobins · Posted: Tue Sep 03, 2002 12:57 am Post subject:

Spanish Warpig · Posted: Tue Sep 03, 2002 5:50 am Post subject:

Warpigs fight
A lonly sniper takes his aim
A medic concs, a spy begins to feign
A fatty crouched near to the floor
A soldier has health for one rocket jump more
A nimble scout comes running by
A demo's pipebombs in waiting lie
A tiny engie his emp primed
A pyros flame burns one final time

the sniper shoots, the demo dies
his pipebombs remove the quick scouts eyes
the sniper is spotted the soldier jumps
but with one quick shot his sprits slump
another shot the engie explodes
his emp removes the medics nose
the fatty and the pyro fight
his flames end the fatties night
but the red dot cannot be undone
one headshot ends the pyros fun
the spy awakens and begins to run
but from the medics poisen coughs
a final shot takes his sneaky head off
the battle thought won the sniper retreats
but there is one left who he cannot defeat
the great warpig fires the sniper dies
for none can evade warpigs eyes.
his sniper dot adds a redish light
all shall perish by its might.

just wrote this as i typed what do you guys think

-=ITS=-GaladerieL[Vegas] · Posted: Tue Sep 03, 2002 6:57 am Post subject:

that is one

of a poem you have there spanish warpig

keep up the good work on it hehehe and thanks all for sharing your poems with me.. I enjoy reading them and making more of my own to write and share with you

And thank you bobins for the kind thoughts of writing my poems they bring me joy so naturally except when i run into a writers block Ack!! will keepp doing my best though on sharing them and i can even make private ones to share if u like all you have to do is ask me and i am willing to make one for u

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frag you all soon for fun and you all have a great day

Spanish Warpig · Posted: Wed Sep 04, 2002 5:01 am Post subject:

In darkness now the whole world rests
it has been proven one team is best
the win was fate
there offence great
the d could not be beat
what skill it takes to make the feat
some fast some strong some others weak
for the red teams flags blue seeks
but no matter how hard the blue team tries
a sentry gun in waiting lies

imho this peom sux

-=ITS=-GaladerieL[Vegas] · Posted: Wed Sep 11, 2002 4:16 pm Post subject:

another poem coming soon and nice work on your poem again spanish warpig hehehe!! i love sharing and writing peoms!! and i am gonna work on hopefully today sometime!!

Da Omega Snipa · Posted: Wed Sep 11, 2002 4:22 pm Post subject:

hmmmmmmmMm...uhhhh o yea i remeber why i went to post ....

i have the worlds best poem...BUT i can't tell any of u its top secret trust me its an amazing poem srry i can't sahre it with u all
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BitterBeerFace · Posted: Thu Sep 12, 2002 3:54 pm Post subject:

Short and bitter:

Oh how we long to hear
The words so seldom said
Silently, the time slips by
One starts to feel mislead

When all was said and done
One-sided was the affair
All important was the one,
The other was just there.

-=ITS=-GaladerieL[Vegas] · Posted: Tue Oct 01, 2002 4:57 am Post subject:

any poems ppl wanna place here your welcome to leave them here

.. i am gonna work on another one soon but until then i will share this one

there once was a place so wild and free that no could see
such beauty as these animals are to me running wild and free
the bays, chestnust, grays and browns and paints and pinto to
the fields and islands u see them on is called GaladerieL's isalnd
the spirts run wild year after year and the colts and filles
a place of wonder and fantasy come true for all to see
to the day so bright and beautiful the colors of grey turn
into a bright yellow and gold during the day and the horses,
sires and mares and to the colts, fillies, and yearlings all around
also it is time to jump,run and play and make a day of it

to the afternoon times in a field in the background you can see stables
and houses a bound on an island called nanite's land which is a boat ride
across from GaladerieL's island where the horses run free and wild
in nanites island u can find hotels, and malls, and western style eating galore
you can also find little shopping stores with nanite suvinors and pictures of
GaladerieL's horses which come in a variety of breeds

not what said in poem on
GaladerieL's island there is one big ranch house with a barn on a hill stocked full for
the winter months and broodmares caring for the new born foals

on into bushido's boat for bushido is the captain of his boat and makes
the rules loud and clear and the #1 rule is be kind to your fellow passageners
#2 is the cost only $1.00 one way and $2.00 round trip and #3 a emergency
service to the vets is free because vets have to be on call when
needed to help there customers out! also on nante island is a shop
run and owned by GaladerieL who sells tack of all kinds and saddle
soaps galore with bridles and bits along with many other etc items

Another poem written and expressed by
-=ITS=-GaladerieL[Vegas] Aka Horses4You

bobins · Posted: Tue Oct 01, 2002 3:59 pm Post subject:

yay the long awaited third poem... gj.. i particularly liked the first verse.

keep em commin always a pleasure to read

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The Nanite · Posted: Tue Oct 01, 2002 4:07 pm Post subject:

ROOFCUTTER · Posted: Wed Nov 12, 2003 7:18 am Post subject:

I'd like to save the world today and keep the children safe, I'd like to make it so no one had to kill, their next door neighbor sons, I'd like to say just stop the killing but you know it must be fun, I'd like to give everyone some peace, but it just would be undone. I'd like to say thank you to all the veterns of war. I'd like to say I wish there were never a reason for their season to end in war.
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