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PostPosted: Mon Mar 28, 2005 7:43 pm    Post subject: Check out my band! Reply with quote

Hey people, check out my band! We rock! lol no seriously, this is a ROUGH draft (as far as recording goes). It's a little on the heavy side. Let me know what you think - PLEASE

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PostPosted: Mon Mar 28, 2005 8:26 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Umm need a differnt link as it says I am not logged in correctly
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PostPosted: Mon Mar 28, 2005 8:35 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Holy crap that is awesome.
The only thing I can say is that the volume for the singer needs to be louder.
What is your role in the band?
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PostPosted: Mon Mar 28, 2005 9:08 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

First and foremost I would say that that song really really rocked

Now for a bit of constructive critique. From my own personal experience with performing in rock bands, I really like your style. However, I believe two or three things should be changed.

First of all, crank up the mic volume and your bass guitar(just a lil).

Secondly, the first chorus type thing, where the music gets heavy for the first time, doesn't have a very good transition from the sort of softer and more melodic intro in my opinion, consider revising it so it is more congruent with the pre-chorus and so it flows better.

Your drummer is quite good, I enjoy his style, however towards the end of the song, I would consider not using 16th notes on the ride symbal, and instead using accented 8th or quarter notes, i believe it would add a heavier aspect to your sound. I simply think the 16th notes are a bit too much, but otherwise i really like his playing.

Other than that, it sounds great to me, i'd love to see you guys in concert some time.

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P.S. I'm a drummer, if you were wondering
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PostPosted: Mon Mar 28, 2005 9:20 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Simpleman wrote:
Umm need a differnt link as it says I am not logged in correctly

Same here
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PostPosted: Mon Mar 28, 2005 9:35 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Try using IE or an FTP client.


Pretty cool song! Just couldn't hear the singing.
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PostPosted: Mon Mar 28, 2005 11:52 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

i got a 530 error
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PostPosted: Tue Mar 29, 2005 12:33 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

If you're using Internet Explorer, you might need to go into the options and enable folder for viewing FTP, then right click to log in as. I play one of the guitars. We're brand new, don't even have a name yet. But it's fun!! The recording/mastering wasn't the best, I'm workin on it. Thanks for checkin it out! Tell your friends!
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PostPosted: Tue Mar 29, 2005 5:51 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

That was good.
If I tried to play that I would probably pull a muscle.
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PostPosted: Tue Mar 29, 2005 2:58 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote



Damn this is good.
This would be a dynamite song if u would have some1 good recording it and editing
Keep it coming


Bass and mic volume needs something like every1 has sayed
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PostPosted: Tue Mar 29, 2005 4:29 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

when i try to log in using IE it crashes
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PostPosted: Tue Mar 29, 2005 5:04 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

that was very good I only wish the vocals were louder.
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PostPosted: Tue Mar 29, 2005 10:32 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Sounds good. I'm learning to play guitar and Squirrel plays drums. l3eeron how long have you been playing guitar? When you remix it bring the vocal tracks more up front. I like your sound. ROCK ON!!!
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PostPosted: Wed Mar 30, 2005 2:17 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Hey thanks BT, glad you liked it too Ummmm, I've been playing off n on for about 15 years. We just got this nice digital recorder...so we're learning by trial n error. Sounds a million times better live, that's for sure. I'll let you know when i upload the next songs.
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PostPosted: Wed Mar 30, 2005 6:15 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I look forward to hearing them. I think you guys are really on to something.
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