a song

JtH · Posted: Wed Apr 30, 2003 10:15 pm Post subject: a song

ok now i dont know if you guys know this or not but i am in a band and i play lead guitar. the name of the band is 50 line screen. well i like this girl alot and i wrote a song for her. its not finished yet but it will be soon. im just wondering what yall think of it because i want your opinions before we play it for her. i also have other songs that we wrote and if you guys like this one id gladly show you the other ones and even if you dont like it and are just curious ill show them. well this song is called jenny (because its the girls name) and here it goes.

50 line screen - Jenny
lyrics by: justin francis (me)

I wish i could see
a new light
and sing
like your eyes do
like when the sun hits
your hair
just right
and it glows the softest amber glow

and i wanna feel
i wanna feel wanted
i wanna be perfection
i wanna be
everything you are

sometimes i stare
deep in your eyes
i get lost in the world
known as your mind
fascinating
a sea of hope
i wanna sleep on
that shore

and i wanna feel
i wanna feel wanted
i wanna be perfection
i wanna be
everywhere you are

if i could have
just a moment
a moment in your
company
a moment could never
last long enough
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YourPowersAreWeakOldMan · Posted: Wed Apr 30, 2003 10:21 pm Post subject:

When you make it don't forget the subliminal messages to seal the deal.
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JtH · Posted: Wed Apr 30, 2003 10:24 pm Post subject:

i get your drift YPAWOM. what would you suggest?
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