TF-Sonnet!

OSU Snipe Shocker · Posted: Sun Apr 28, 2002 9:32 pm Post subject: TF-Sonnet!

Here it is, this is the latest poem for my English class.

It is a Sonnet for TFC....

Virtual Murder

I pull out my crowbar, glistens in the sun.
An enemy comes forth, soldier in my eye.
Swing in an arc, My steel and I are one.
My bar connects. It sends gibs in the sky.
The red dot gets brighter, I draw a bead.
The rival sniper aims across the bay.
I relax the button, fire at his head.
I revel in the joy of his blood spray.
The game which I play is called Team Fortress,
Much More fun for me than any game of chess.

I know it sux0rz, I usually write free form, short poetry, not this "rhyming" iambic pentameter SHIT!

Let me know what you think anyway!
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Monk · Posted: Sun Apr 28, 2002 9:44 pm Post subject:

Woah, you submit that and you will have the Cops all over you in a second looking for guns stashed in your room

Ever since Columbine, they have been pretty strict about it.
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MuLiShA · Posted: Sun Apr 28, 2002 10:26 pm Post subject:

hes in college but anyway, i have a very strong disliking for poetry, in fact i hate it. i only read and write it if i have to and sometimes i dont even do that. all im saying is that poetry is the sux0r of all sux0rz that ever sux0r'd.

ToRaK · Posted: Sun Apr 28, 2002 10:28 pm Post subject:

Note to self: do not go to OSU...

ToRaK
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hoaxie · Posted: Sun Apr 28, 2002 10:43 pm Post subject:

Don't listen to them Snipe!!!

Warhammer · Posted: Sun Apr 28, 2002 10:54 pm Post subject: haiku for poetry haters

you hate poetry
your many gibs will be red
staining my clean floor

hoaxie · Posted: Sun Apr 28, 2002 10:57 pm Post subject:

poetry rox0r
you sincerely sux0r
besides that bite me

hehe

MuLiShA · Posted: Sun Apr 28, 2002 10:58 pm Post subject:

well we'll see on tues warhammer

btw, nice avator, looks familiar

OSU Snipe Shocker · Posted: Sun Apr 28, 2002 11:28 pm Post subject: Mulisha sux0rz

Hey mul, did you not notice,

MuLiShA · Posted: Sun Apr 28, 2002 11:38 pm Post subject:

writing is the thing i like least in school. math and science is a piece of cake. i just dont like all the rules there are, seems to 1-dimensional.

Goldom · Posted: Sun Apr 28, 2002 11:45 pm Post subject:

Snaggletooth · Guest

I think GoalDumb just had the shortest post ever in the history of short posts. It didn't even have any words in it...

BitterBeerFace · Posted: Sun Apr 28, 2002 11:59 pm Post subject:

I, for one, think that kicks ass! I'll bet a nickle that there's another TFC player in his class who'll get a bigtime kick out of it

You should bind stuff like that for use in games, OSU... much better than "CHEETUR" and "WTF?" all the time

Demented Avenger · Posted: Mon Apr 29, 2002 2:24 am Post subject:

my fav
http://www.mercenary.com/love.html
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OS · Posted: Mon Apr 29, 2002 4:49 am Post subject:

That's not a proper sonnet. It's only 10 lines. Not iambic pentameters

I don't really get the tech side of poetry, but as Mul would say, poetry "is a piece of cake"

It's fairly good Snipe, don't let them discourage you. And who really cares what Mul says anyways

Oh, and Avenger, is that a real gravestone? If it is, that's a classic!